This is a short fiction I wrote for a Uni subject I completed a while back. Enjoy!
Cheers
Steve ๐ย
Divides. By Stephen Thompson.
My mother is dusting. The feather duster she uses swishes lightly over the mementoes and photo frames on the shelf, cautiously tracing a path through our family history like a ship through a field of ice. I watch intently as motes of dust shimmer in the light, settling to the carpet, knowing this is only a short pause on their journey.
My father reclines in his chair, reading. The air is pungent with the thick fumes of an unfiltered camel cigarette. This is how I will remember him long after he is gone, like a silhouette left on a wall after a nuclear blast, its form as anonymous as the figure who left it.
My wife sits before me. Her eyes are electric drills and I am the timber. Iโm staring at the table before us and my apologies fall to the floor along with our shared lives; wood shavings, waiting to be swept away.
My son is sitting on the lounge before his games console, the light from the TV playing over his intent features. I sit beside him, reading, occasionally glancing up to see the interaction of figures on screen. Between the lounge cushions is a yawning chasm.
My girlfriend sits across the table from me, sipping from her cup. My own mug sits before me untouched, the tan creamer an iceberg on a coffee sea. She smiles and I see our separate shadows painted darkly upon the wall behind her. Dust motes reflect the light as they dance prior to landing. The apologies to come are an abyss I must eventually cross.


I could see it as I read itโผ๏ธ Wonderful picture with words ๐
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Thanks so much, Harolene! I love to write proseโI just wish I had more time to do so more often. ๐
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Wow. Very very good work.
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Thanks, Tara! ๐
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Oh, good one!
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Cheers, VJ. One of the few times Iโve gotten literary lol ๐
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Loved it!
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Wonderful word picture. It draws you in.
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Thanks! Much appreciated ๐
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