This is a short fiction I wrote for a Uni subject I completed a while back. Enjoy!
Cheers
Steve 🙂
Divides. By Stephen Thompson.
My mother is dusting. The feather duster she uses swishes lightly over the mementoes and photo frames on the shelf, cautiously tracing a path through our family history like a ship through a field of ice. I watch intently as motes of dust shimmer in the light, settling to the carpet, knowing this is only a short pause on their journey.
My father reclines in his chair, reading. The air is pungent with the thick fumes of an unfiltered camel cigarette. This is how I will remember him long after he is gone, like a silhouette left on a wall after a nuclear blast, its form as anonymous as the figure who left it.
My wife sits before me. Her eyes are electric drills and I am the timber. I’m staring at the table before us and my apologies fall to the floor along with our shared lives; wood shavings, waiting to be swept away.
My son is sitting on the lounge before his games console, the light from the TV playing over his intent features. I sit beside him, reading, occasionally glancing up to see the interaction of figures on screen. Between the lounge cushions is a yawning chasm.
My girlfriend sits across the table from me, sipping from her cup. My own mug sits before me untouched, the tan creamer an iceberg on a coffee sea. She smiles and I see our separate shadows painted darkly upon the wall behind her. Dust motes reflect the light as they dance prior to landing. The apologies to come are an abyss I must eventually cross.
I could see it as I read it‼️ Wonderful picture with words 😇
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Thanks so much, Harolene! I love to write prose—I just wish I had more time to do so more often. 🙂
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Wow. Very very good work.
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Thanks, Tara! 🙂
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Oh, good one!
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Cheers, VJ. One of the few times I’ve gotten literary lol 🙂
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Loved it!
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🙏😃
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Wonderful word picture. It draws you in.
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Thanks! Much appreciated 🙂
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