Haiku Friday: The Path. A haiku.

Laidback DMAugust 10, 2018July 30, 2018haiku, Poetry, WritingAnxiety, Depression, Hope, Life, Love, Mental Health, poem, Poetry, Writing

The Path
Thank me when the night
journeys into day and the
path is lit again.

Haiku is a Japanese poetic form with a strict 5/7/5 syllable and line structure.

Cheers

Steve 🙂

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11 thoughts on “Haiku Friday: The Path. A haiku.”

Rylan Skelly says:

August 11, 2018 at 2:17 am

I love this haiku! It’s all about saying everything without saying much.

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1. stevestillstanding says:
  
  August 11, 2018 at 7:30 am
  
  Thanks, Rylan! I agree, haiku is a disciplined poetic form. Less is more lol 🙂
  
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  1. Rylan Skelly says:
    
    August 12, 2018 at 1:42 am
    
    You’re welcome 🙂 How long have you been writing?
    
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  2. stevestillstanding says:
    
    August 12, 2018 at 8:02 am
    
    I’ve been writing poetry since March last year, and writing in general for about two years 🙂
    
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  3. Rylan Skelly says:
    
    August 14, 2018 at 2:41 am
    
    Good for you, you’ve got great talent!
    
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  4. stevestillstanding says:
    
    August 14, 2018 at 8:06 am
    
    Thanks! 🙂
    
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Words from a little person says:

August 12, 2018 at 1:23 pm

I love this Steve.

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1. stevestillstanding says:
  
  August 12, 2018 at 4:51 pm
  
  Thanks, Nyx! 🙂
  
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  1. Words from a little person says:
    
    August 13, 2018 at 8:32 am
    
    You’re welcome
    
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William Aston says:

August 16, 2018 at 3:56 pm

Lovely stuff

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1. stevestillstanding says:
  
  August 16, 2018 at 4:07 pm
  
  Cheers, William! Much appreciated 🙂
  
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