I live in surreality,
not quite alive, not quite dead.
I wander from one point to the next,
a confused and weary traveller,
conspicuously without intent.
The pleasures of the material
and the impractical align in
tacit disapproval.
I am a wanderer in confusion,
lost in the blizzard of bodies,
grabbing myself for warmth
like a frost-bitten seeker
faced with his last
insurmountable peak.
Someday this journey
will be done, and the last thing
I see, may be the first I ever saw.
As if all that mattered was the
concentric circle I travelled in
and the hoarfrost patina
on my windows,
obscuring what could have been,
and should have been.
Deeply interesting
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Cheers! π
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Enjoyed the evocative and striking images in this poem. Thanks Steve.
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Thank you, Nikita. I aim to please lol π
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I really like this, Steve, and at the same time I hope for you that it is not a circle, but a spiral, and you bypass these moments on your way to new, happier experiences.
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Thanks, VJ. I hope so, too π
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From my perspective, I can you tell you life usually has a few unexpected things up its sleeve. Thank God.
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Lol! So true π
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I enjoy reading your poem. A journey is not a straight road. Thank you for sharing your journey!
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And thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Miriam! π
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You’re always welcome, Steve! I’m glad you’re still standing tall!! π π
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Reblogged this on Phoenix Coaching Solutions Blog and commented:
Winter is upon us …
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Steve, I could feel this poem as I read it. Very well done:-)
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Thanks so much! π
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Hi Steve. I felt your poetic words about the nature of life’s concentric circles. “A wanderer in confusion” and ”what could have been, should have been”, but it’s not. π
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Thanks, Olga. Every poem means something different to every reader, thatβs why poetry is such a wonderful and versatile medium for expression! I love that everyone finds something different to connect with in my poems. π
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So magically beautiful. Miraculously fitting the season. Passionately “grabbing myself for warmth” and writing a memory book…
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Thank you, Tatjana π
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This is really good. It’s what I’d write if I could write it.
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Thank you! π
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