Steve picked up his guitar. It was an old acoustic: earthy, time worn and weather beaten, with thick gauge strings slightly out of tune. He plucked the neck harmonics and adjusted the tuning heads, listening intently as each tone wavered and steadied. When he finished, he strummed an open G chord, and, satisfied with his efforts, commenced playing a song he had written long ago.
As usual it was a tale of woe and forgotten love. Blues, but not quite blues; some jazzy sevenths and ringing open strings brought a gentle dissonance to the melody. Lyrics breathily whispered to the night.
Steve drifted lazily back to bars long since closed and audiences long since forgotten – he could almost smell the drifting smoke in the room. Gently rocking, his left foot tapped out a rhythmic beat in time to his strumming.
Then it was over, as if it had never been.
This is a uni piece I wrote many months ago. Everyone had to write an introduction for themselves. The final assignment has been marked, so I can post it now.
you got my imagination working.. You write really well.
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Thanks, Moon Lei. Much appreciated. 🙂
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I love flash fiction!
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Thanks, Eric. This piece was short due to the uni word count limit for the exercise. But I guess I could try my hand at writing some more. 🙂
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Writying flash fiction is a skill I’m working towards and I love to read others work. Please do write more. I’d love to read it.
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