Here’s an exercise I did for Uni, a fair while ago. Use the question for a writer’s prompt, if you like.
Do some exercise, listen to some music, or even listen to the clock tick. Find an everyday rhythm and write a poem of no more than 7 lines in response to the theme ‘Women’. After writing your poem, tell us if finding an everyday rhythm helped you or hindered you in your writing practice?
Woman. A poem.
Round and round it
goes, the anxious tide in ebbs and
flows, her conversation running on and
on, but leaving me with nothingHow I mourn my woman’s
song, but she’s long gone, a
whirlpool like no otherStephen Thompson
The washing machine clunked and whirred through its cycle. Watery imagery crept into my poem in the first two lines (probably because I had no idea where I was heading at that point. I knew it had to be about women. Then, as usual, it became personal. Most of my poems are). I’m not sure if the machine’s rhythm helped at all.
I’ve been a musician for about 30 years, starting as a drummer and percussionist and then moving into guitar and singing, so rhythm and syncopation are things that come naturally to me. My ex-wife hated my constant hand and finger tapping.
When I write, I like to establish a natural flow. My recent experiments with enjambment on my blog have mixed up that rhythm a bit, and even though I used it in this poem, I found I maintained a rhythmic consistency.
Maybe the wash cycle did help after all.
Cheers
Steve 😊
Awesome!! ❤
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Thanks so much, Virginia! Glad you liked it 🙂
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I liked it. Many readers naturally start following the rhyme of poems after the first line or two, so I think a regular rhythm helps the writer stick with the pattern.
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Hi Chelsea, thanks. I agree that a regular rhythm for some poems is a good thing, but I also think that varying the meter can bring an interesting dissonance to a poem. I like to experiment a lot lol 🙂
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True. I enjoy many of that sort as well. They’ve got to have the skill level, like you, to make the changes interesting and not completely off-putting.
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Thanks, Chelsea, much appreciated! My vague confidence and fragile ego are bolstered for yet another day 😊
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“I’m not completely off-putting!” Sounds like the sorts of compliments I get. 😀
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👌😁🙏
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This turned out very well – great exercise. Thanks for sharing.
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You’re very welcome, VJ 🙂
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